Sunday, June 6, 2010

Night Watch

The story of somebody's life. It's realy painful when the old man on his deathbed wished to see his son.When I red the story I felt painful, and the hand of god helped the oldman get relaxed for the first time since he intered the hospital.
If I was doughter of the oldman in the hospital .Iwould feel vary angry.The first reaction I would be in is hurrying up, I would do it to meet him before he dies. Also I will be angry because I did not have the opprtunity to visit my dad for the last time.My second reaction would be gratful, because I knew their was someone who take a good care of my dad when I was abcent. I would like to be close to him to the last moment of his life.

2 comments:

  1. This is a very good personal response to the story. You just need to watch your spelling to help with the clarity of your writing.

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  2. Hello Mayssa,

    It is me again as l forget to give your grade for the paragraph. 9/10

    Rosemary.

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