If I was doughter of the oldman in the hospital .Iwould feel vary angry.The first reaction I would be in is hurrying up, I would do it to meet him before he dies. Also I will be angry because I did not have the opprtunity to visit my dad for the last time.My second reaction would be gratful, because I knew their was someone who take a good care of my dad when I was abcent. I would like to be close to him to the last moment of his life.
Sunday, June 6, 2010
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This is a very good personal response to the story. You just need to watch your spelling to help with the clarity of your writing.
ReplyDeleteHello Mayssa,
ReplyDeleteIt is me again as l forget to give your grade for the paragraph. 9/10
Rosemary.