Sunday, June 27, 2010

The Best Place in The World for Mrs.Kristi

I consider the best place is USA . I can find more things that I lost in native country.Everyone has free speech, freehand and free ideas. It's very easy for everybody to change the state and to take a chance.
I prefer USA, simply because I find the human services that become helpful for the families low income . It helps to prevent poverty so, its result to reduce the crime in society. Actually ,the human service is limited but,best from nothing.
Even,in American public education is operoted by state and local governments that students to take great opportunity for education with degree which rehabilitation to find good job. In addition to ,the federal grant helps to continue the student in studying.
Furthermore, everybody can travel among state for tourism to meet with friends and family or to find another job, this does not require a passport or take visa to enter a state. I always, compare with other countries in overseas.
In conclusion, I have discovered a lot of amazing things in U.S. that I have never seen before. I hope that one day old_world follow the USA style of services and living.

1 comment:

  1. Hello Mayssa,

    1.) watch out for articles--like a, an , and the
    2.) what did you lose in your native country--what is your native country?
    3.) You need to have more details in each paragraph. One topic sentence (which you have) but then details to support it.

    This is a good start!
    --k
    :-)

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