Sunday, July 11, 2010

Practice 5&6 for Mrs.Kristi

Practice 5:
1- Narrowed topic:Overcoming fears
Controlling idea :Needs more will power
Topic sentence:Everyone have will power to overcoming fears.

2-Narrowed topic : Balancing work and play
Controlling idea :Required schedual in your system.
Topic sentance :Balancing work and play requied schedual in your system.

3- Norrowed topic : credit card
Controlling idea : cridet card important
Topic sentence :Everyone should have cridit card because it is important in these days.

Practice 6:
Paragraph 1#: Sometimes pets make human survive.
Paragraph 2#:The advantage of digital photography.

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